Unit One: Changing Your Skin: A Narrative
Essay
Changed Skin: The Kwakiutl, a native people on the Northwest coast of North
America, hold a myth about a salmon who, tired of swimming, climbed onto the
river bank and became a man. A flood came threatening the land, so he put
his salmon skin back on and swam happily. Once the flood subsided, he took
his salmon skin back off and built himself a house. However, after he set
the corner posts, he discovered a problem; the roof beams were too large for
him to put in place himself. At that moment, he heard thunder. Turning, he
saw a gigantic bird standing on a rock. He said, “Thunderbird, it’s
too bad you’re not a man, or you could help me.” The bird lifted
its beak, and there was a human face underneath. He was a man and helped gladly.
Option One: Write a Narrative in which you discuss
a time you had to change your skin, either
willingly or through necessity. What event necessitated this change? What
did you lack that necessitated this change? What did changing skins involve?
Were others accepting of your changed skin? Did the new skin accomplish what
you hoped it would? Did you revert back to your original skin or keep the
new one? Is changing skins a shortcut or a natural part of life? You might
compare the skins into which you've changed or even describe coming to college
as a way to discover new skins. As you engage in the process of writing this
project, the project will change and that's okay. You have to give yourself
enough flexibility to allow your project to grow and change based on peer
review responses, my comments and things you will learn as you reflect on
the project.
Option Two: Write about tattoos and/or body modification. You can write about
the history of tattoos or body modification. You could write about your personal
history with tattoos or body modification. How and why you participate in
the culture. Why you got the tattoos or piercing, how they've changed the
way you see your body or how others see your body. This might be a way for
you to argue against society's view of people with tattoos or body modification,
listing misconceptions and refuting them. Or a way to discuss the history
of body art, bringing in other cultures' views versus American views.
The narrative should be detailed and should be told in the form of a personal
essay. As a form, the personal essay places the writer at center stage. This
doesn't mean that once there the writer's resonsibility is pour out her secrets,
share her pain or confess her sins. Some essays might have confessional qualities
but most often they do not. Yet, a personal essay, is still exposed. There
is no hiding behind the pronoun "one" as in "one might think"
or "one often feels," no lurking in the shadows of the passive voice:
"This paper will argue..." The personal essay is first person territory.
In this sense, the personal essay is much like a
photographic self-portrait. Like a picture, a good personal essay tells the
truth, or it tells a truth about the writer/subject, and it often captures
the writer at a particular moment of time. Therefore, the experience of taking
a self-portrait, or confronting an old picture of oneself taken by someone
else, can create the feeling of exposure that writing a personal essay often
does. it does more. When we gaze at ourselves in a photograph we often see
it as yanked from a larger story about ourselves, stories that thread their
way through our lives and give us ideas about who we were and who we are.
This is what the personal essay demands of us: We must somehow present ourselves
truthfully and measure our past against the present. In other words, when
we hold a photograph of ourselves we know more than the person we see there
knew, and as writers of the personal essay, we must share that knowledge and
understanding with readers.
